xMichiyo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hotel Mario Intro - Nes]

The last reviewer doesn't get it.

The last reviewer obviously doesn't get what "Hotel Mario" is, otherwise he would have gotten it. =/

Anyway, it was kinda funy. You should do the Zelda CDI games as well.

[Drawing Tutorial]

Doesn't teach anything.

This tutorial really doesn't teach anything... It just basically teaches you how to draw one character. You didn't go over any real drawing basics, and you didn't teach anything that could apply to drawing more than just the one character.

A tutorial should explain as many things as possible. A drawing tutorial, for example, should go over different shapes, different tools, etc.

However, I can see some effort in this Flash, so it's not toally horrible. I'll give you a 3/10. Please try to actually teach the viewers something that can apply in drawing many things if you ever decide to make another drawing tutorial.

I'm being constructive as I can, keep going with your work~

-Michi

[R.I.P Billy Mays]

A decent Billy Mays Flash? o.o

All of the supposed "tributes" I've seen today of Billy Mays usually just make fun of him and are generally really disrespectful. This one, though, actually gives a bit of info and is nicely done. Good job. <3

-Michi

[Jimmy Eat World TheMiddle]

Hmm..

I am in love with this band and this song, and I think you've got a pretty good concept going here. I would suggest not skipping the chorus so much. The chorus of a song is the most recognized part. The most "catchy", you know?

If you ever re-do this video in the future, animate some scenes for the chorus. I think it would make the video have a more "complete" feel.

On the good notes, though, I really like how you took some of the metaphors of the song and showed them in your video more literally. For example, the line "You're doing better on your own, so don't buy in", you had a stack of GIANT dollars fall on someone! That was a really cool. You did similar things with other parts of the song, and they were all cute, creative, and fun.

Another thing that struck me as funny was the "Live right now" line with the clock and date. It took me a minute to catch that it's set to be the exact date on my computer. That's just.. wow! XD

I'll give you 7 stars, and a 4 rating. :)

Well, I hope this review was helpful to you in some way. Good job, and good luck in the future! <3